Wednesday, 12 September 2018

Animal migration

1 comment:

  1. Hi, Helen


    I'm Manali I'm a year 7 student at Pompallier Catholic School.

    I've read your posts they are very interesting, like how you explained how and why the Golden Cow-Nose ray migrates. I found the facts very well done.

    Next time maybe you could punctuate the the paragraphs better.

    Here check out my blog:
    https://pcsmanalip.blogspot.com/

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